Sound analysis feedback

Cambridge Technical L3 Media              Unit 1: Analysing media products and audiences 

 

Student Name:  Shayi Aluwoade                     Class:   12Y               Minimum Target Grade:   MP       Personal Target Grade for task: Distinction        Grade awarded for this task: Distinction

 

Assignment:  Sound analysis of a Warp or 20^th Century Fox film

 

Self-Assessment Coversheet

Areas for improvement for Task …... Include the word     Include the word denotes when describing the sounds I here, improve grammar in some aspects

How are you going to address the above issues? I am going to include the word denotes more and improve grammar

What do you still think you need to work on/improve to achieve these? Not much just a few grammar corrections and including the word denotes more.